10/3/2011

I enjoyed the story by the girl wearing navy (?) about her brother with autism. I did not get to find her name after class as I had to leave promptly. The whole story is substantial because, not only does it follow a very well balanced storyline and allude to the Heroes Journey, but it is an uncommon story. It could easily be made into a short film because it has such a simple, yet profound lesson to be learned: never assume, know what you're looking for. The only thing I would recommend is that she develop the characters a bit more and introduce the relationship of herself and her brother a bit more beforehand